Monday, March 11, 2013

Five card story

Five Card Story: Dwelling of time

a Five Card Flickr story created by Natalia

flickr photo by Serenae

flickr photo by Serenae

flickr photo by Serenae

flickr photo by bionicteaching

flickr photo by Danny Nicholson

One beautiful, sunny day, me and my two other friends decided to take a walk. We were strolling around the streets of our home city. Suddenly we noticed a bulding, we have never seen before, although we thought, we knew the city inside out. We decided to check what is inside. Surprisingly the doors where open. After we walked in, we heard a terrible, loud sound of ticking without any pause. When our sight got used to the dark we saw an immense amount of clocks of all kinds. In the corner of the room we saw a boy sitting in a large armchair. He had a terrifying, piercing gaze. We had a feeling that he could look through our souls. Then we saw IT, lying at the feet of a boy. It was a cheetah. The cat raised its head, yawned and said: "It isn't your time. Now go". We acted like we were just waiting for this order. We run like hell till we were far away from that strange place. Some time after this creepy event I checked out if the house was still there. Deep in my heart I wished I hadn't tempted fate but I was so curious... What was predictable I found nothing.


  1. WOW! That's quite a story! The boy's eyes really give me chills. One thing, though: I asked you to include a sentence with "I wish..." in your story, remember? :) You could still do it, couldn't you?

    1. I have fixed my mistake :) I'm happy that you liked it :)

    2. Thanks, now it's even better! If you wanted to make it really perfect, you could give it another look in terms of typos and some other minor problems. Just saying ;)